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Luke_Latimer
Luke_Latimer
posted in Landing Page Review
Inclusion training landing page critiques

Hi all, We’ve just launched our first landing page and I really value any honest feedback the community would have! Traffic is all coming via Google Ads and we currently have quite good CTR but our previous, custom made landing pages weren’t converting and were given a ‘below average’ rank… hence the move to Unbounce! Our goal is simply to start getting some conversions and in time lower our bid cost as a result of lots of happy leads converting on our pages 🙂 enquiries.inclusion-program.com.au http://enquiries.inclusion-program.com.au/gender-equality-workplace/ Thanks!

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Luke_Latimer
4 years ago
JonathanFunk
JonathanFunk
posted in Landing Page Review
Taking our Commercial HVAC LP too the next level

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? This is a B2B lead gen LP targeted to business owners seeking HVAC solutions. Since June, we’ve had over 22,000 visitors and a 1.45% conversion rate. Mostly phone calls. We would like to bump this number if possible. As for form submissions, a majority of the leads come from people from another country seeking jobs. Any feedback is appreciated. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google Ads 3: What is your conversion goal? Form Submissions & Click to Call 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 https://hvac.valleyrefrigeration.ca/

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SeanKirby
4 years ago
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tsingleton
posted in Landing Page Review
Internet Provider Landing Page with Contact Form feedback

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Trying to increase conversion rate. Have been stuck around 8% for the past few months and have done extensive A/B testing. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Facebook advertising campaign 3: What is your conversion goal? Would like to at least be consistently around 10%! 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 getunwired.com Rural Internet in the Valley | unWired Broadband

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Adam_Smartschan
4 years ago
Nick_Cotter
Nick_Cotter
posted in Landing Page Review
Quote Request Landing Page Feedback

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? I’m trying to increase conversions on this page. It’s been sitting around ~12% for past 180 days. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Organic search 3: What is your conversion goal? ~25% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 try.shipbob.com ShipBob Fulfillment Quote

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Jess
Unbounce Community Team
4 years ago
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michaeljhass99
posted in Landing Page Review
Improve My Landing Page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible I am trying to people to view my video on the 2nd page of my funnel, then ultimately sign up for a phone/zoom consultation with me on the third and fourth page of my funnel 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Facebook advertising 3: What is your conversion goal? To get people to sign up for a consultation with me 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: https://www.stellar.financial/signup/

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Malik
4 years ago
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michaeljhass99
posted in Landing Page Review
Landing Page Help!

I’ve made several improvements to my landing page along with the 4 other pages of my funnel and I think they look great. However, I cant seem to get many people to move onto the 2nd page of my funnel and absolutely nobody has ever gone through all 5 pages of the funnel. what can I do to improve my conversions? (I am currently driving traffic to the landing page with Facebook advertising)

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4 years ago
Supriya_Mukherjee
Supriya_Mukherjee
posted in Landing Page Review
Product education of a sleep device and increasing conversion rate of ORDER NOW button

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible We are a selling a sleeping device which improves sleep by regulating the pillow temperature through a water circulation system. Based on sleep science it targets the head area with the perfect temperature. It is a $399 product so it is not easy to convince people and hence product education plays a big role. We need to educate people both about the sleep science side (cooling is good for sleep) and the product side (how it works). So the real challenge is to convince people to clic on the ORDER NOW button in the bloc having the price tag. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? We are driving traffic through Paid Ads from Facebook, google etc 3: What is your conversion goal? Conversion goal is clicking on the Order Now button which directs the user to initiate checkout 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: https://event.getmoona.com/moonasmartcooling/

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SeanKirby
4 years ago
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ACHNET
posted in Landing Page Review
Feedback for our Landing Page!

Hi All, it’s really nice to be part of this community. We are an online market place where we provide individuals with the right set of tools, networks, resources, and coaching support to achieve their personal and professional goals.” It would be really nice if you could give us your feedback for our landing page. Cheers! Please visit: https://www.achnet.com?su=v1d3bv9f

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SeanKirby
4 years ago
LouTromans
LouTromans
posted in Landing Page Review
I made 5 landing pages. Deleted everything. Went back to basics, and saw the highest signup rate

Hey guys, just wanted to share this little story with you all! It might even help a few of you… So as the title says I made 5 landing pages. Each new one I made more elaborate and detailed than the former. I was expecting more and more signups with each iteration. Signups came to a halt. It started to annoy me a little bit. I added more detail, more GIF’s, more pictures, more copy. More, more, and more equalled less, less, and less signups. So I scrapped every one of them. Went back to the original, cut out a load of the bullshit and went with the bare minimum. Straight to the point. Only kept what was crucially needed. The most basic landing page, barley a page long. Which is converting higher than anything else I’ve tried so far. (Let’s hope it does at scale too with FB ads). I think in marketing and entrepreneur life, in general, we tend to see more as more, and less as less. But sometimes the most simple and easy things are best kept that way. Very first landing page (30th April)

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icecoldmn
4 years ago
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michaeljhass99
posted in Landing Page Review
What can I do to get people from my landing page to take the next little step?

https://www.stellar.financial/signup/ I have created a 5 page funnel (link above) and I and sending traffic to the landing page from Facebook advertising and it seems to work well (I think, it has reached 2023 people so far…). My problem is that I haven’t had one person take the next step on to page two of the funnel to watch my video. I have had 88 people hit my landing page and not one person to take the step forward so far. I used a two page funnel last year to promote local seminars that worked well. I am now trying to promote online consultations with prospective clients, I am an Investment Adviser. I did higher a business coach last year to teach all this stuff and I it worked very well for me last year. But now with the Covid mess, I do not want to waist my money promoting local seminars when nobody is going to show because of this mess. the business coach did teach me about this particular 5 page funnel and said it is working for many other advisers today. I have implemen

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SeanKirby
4 years ago
Consecca
Consecca
posted in Landing Page Review
Feedback on Landing Page Wireframe please

Hi All, Just wanted to get some feedback on a landing page wireframe I have drafted up in sketch. It represents my business idea which is designing landing pages as a service for small business owners and entrepreneurs that either don’t want the hassle of doing it themselves or don’t have the time or budget of hiring an agency. So that’s where I would come in to help them promote their products and services using a combination of my design and branding experience and implementing some of the marketing and persuasion tactics that I have picked up from Unbounce blogs and workshops - something that the average non-designer client will not have a clue about. In terms of where this idea sits the market place I guess it falls in between someone who is already proficient in using Unbounce and knows what they are doing and a big design agency who only work with larger businesses with bigger budgets which would be outside the bracket of what a small business owner could afford. So this is som

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Adam_Smartschan
4 years ago
Malcolm_Roberts
Malcolm_Roberts
posted in Landing Page Review
Https://try.lpanow.com/lpa-info/

**1: I’m wanting to get people to contact us so that we can talk to them about our product. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Via Facebook ads and Google CPC 3: What is your conversion goal? Hard to say as this is my first time. Ultimately if we can sell to 2.5% of web visitors we will be in profit. 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: https://try.lpanow.com/lpa-info/ https://try.lpanow.com/lpa-info/

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Adam_Smartschan
4 years ago
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R_56789
posted in Landing Page Review
Lightbox not connecting

Light box not connecting after submitting form. Please help Screen Shot 2020-07-26 at 01.34.00775×442 2.78 KB

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Jess
Unbounce Community Team
4 years ago
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Bant_Flash
posted in Landing Page Review
LP Feedback Bakery Equipment Page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Increase click through rate to form submission page 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Facebook Ads Campaign - newsfeed 3: What is your conversion goal? 7% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 https://opec.oliverquality.com/facebook-bakery-poco-670-landing-page/ Hey everyone, New to landing page creation - any and all feedback welcome!

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SeanKirby
4 years ago
emiratli
emiratli
posted in Landing Page Review
Crucial Feedback

Hey people I am a co-founder at tractific.com and we try to help increase conversion rates with a no-code data tool and AI-powered solutions. Unbounce community is our first priority since we learned here a lot. Can you give feedback? If you want to get a discount or want to try it please send me a message. I am always happy to give back to the community. Thanks, Emir

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emiratli
4 years ago
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Florent_Crivello
posted in Landing Page Review
LP Feedback – Huddle HQ

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible Explaining my product accurately (is the pitch clear?) and collecting email addresses. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? SEO, Social Media 3: What is your conversion goal? 5% (from visit to email address submit) 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: huddlehq.io Huddle - A virtual office for all your meetings. Remote work that's better than being together. Poke people on the shoulder, and hold virtual brainstorms and happy hours.

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julien_level
4 years ago
Vladimir_Esaulov
Vladimir_Esaulov
posted in Landing Page Review
LP feedback - tiktok analytics

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Low conversion rate 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google Ads, direct links, face 3: What is your conversion goal? 15% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 toki.digital Toki Find what is growing on TikTok right now Thanks for your feedback!

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Vladimir_Esaulov
4 years ago
ReemistCleaning
ReemistCleaning
posted in Landing Page Review
What do you think of my pages...Need Feedback!

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Improve conversion rate 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google Ads 3: What is your conversion goal? 15-20% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page/popup: 👇 Landing page with smart traffic and low conversion rate (is there a way to view both of the variants? when I get one I’m unable to view the other). https://get.reemistcleaning.co.uk/domestic-cleaners/milton-keynes/ As well as the landing page has a low conversion rate the popups also have low conversion rate with variant A having 0% and variant B having 2.94% All feedback and critisism welcome ! 🙂

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thedreamerdesigns
4 years ago
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nicolezoppi
posted in Landing Page Review
Landing page feedback - Cloud storage

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? I’m trying to build a landing page as close to consumers as possible. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? SEM and SEO 3: What is your conversion goal? 7% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 https://kvgyavvgdmiwgsjpaftr.cubbit.io/business/cubbit-for-teams?_storyblok=12366210&_storyblok_c=page&_storyblok_tk[space_id]=75030&_storyblok_tk[timestamp]=1591254374&_storyblok_tk[token]=2d208ce285f809ce91e4c72ebdffab0d834f934e&_storyblok_version=&_storyblok_lang=default&_storyblok_release=0

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Adam_Smartschan
4 years ago
David_Garrett
David_Garrett
posted in Landing Page Review
Learn Conversational Spanish sale page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Sales conversions 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? FB ads to lead magnet, ActiveCampaign Email drip 3: What is your conversion goal? 10% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 https://get.visualspanish.co/spanish/

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Ed_Stanfield
4 years ago
Cameron_R
Cameron_R
posted in Landing Page Review
Need Feedback On A 'Will Writing' service Landing Page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Currently we are struggling with conversions. I have my own ideas of why this LP is not converting but would like to see what other people think. We also use this same sort of template for a couple of other clients so any overall feedback on it would be great. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Paid Traffic 3: What is your conversion goal? 15-20% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 http://unbouncepages.com/will-writing-123test/ (I have copied the page and removed the client logo etc for obvious reasons, but part from that it is the same) Thanks

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Kyle.C
4 years ago
CJFoz
CJFoz
posted in Landing Page Review
Roast🔥 StreemPay: A new payments platform for content

Hi All - would really appreciate your insights and advice, including: is it clear, do you think the solution solves the problem, and would you sign up, and if not why not? Thank you!! Chris 1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? The Paywall Problem: Low conversion rates (sometimes <1%) because a lot of people hate paywalls and don’t want to juggle multiple subscriptions. High churn rates because a lot of people don’t feel like they’re getting consistent value from their subscriptions and so cancel over time. Both of these leading to lower revenue than the content creator needs and deserves. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Non-scalable tactics for now, including Reddit, IndieHackers, Product Hunt, etc. 3: What is your conversion goal? 10% weekly growth in subscribers 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 StreemPay | Your favourite content, minus the paywall StreemPay | Your favourite content,

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CJFoz
4 years ago
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Noa
posted in Landing Page Review
Need your feedback! I have 0 conversion rate :(

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Low conversion rate 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Facebook, emails and SMS 3: What is your conversion goal? around 15% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page/popup: 👇 I have two pages: https://signup.procally.com/ https://giveaway.procally.com/ Thanks for everyone’s help!!! I appreciate it a lot!!

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Adam_Smartschan
4 years ago
trentville
trentville
posted in Landing Page Review
Landing page feedback for Mobile Page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? I need to optimize this page better in order to generate more phone calls and leads. Please note that the link below is meant for Mobile only. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Search ads, etc … 3: What is your conversion goal? My goal is to get as many people calling as possible. If they don’t call, I want to collect as many phone numbers as possible. I am currently asking for a zip code, and then I collect the phone number on the next page. I’m already working on the look of the page after someone submits a zip code. 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 http://www.onlinemedicine.com/barrytest1/ (mobile only link) Thanks for the help!

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Caroline
4 years ago
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dan-stl
posted in Landing Page Review
LP Feedback for Portrait Studio

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible I’m wondering what others think about the copy/language on the page. Are all the CTAs clear? My service comes in a couple different categories, which require different CTAs. As a portrait photographer, I can either offer outdoor sessions or sessions at my studio. I have regular hours at my studio, so allow people to book at their convenience through a scheduler. For outdoor sessions, due to variable weather/commute, I need to talk to them on the phone for a bit. Also, do you think the sections are in the right order? Are there any unanswered questions this page left you with? (Whether process, pricing, or anything else.) 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Combination of Adwords, LinkedIn, and Facebook ads. 3: What is your conversion goal? Either 1) Forms filled out to book an outdoor session or 2) Direct bookings for my studio sessions at the bottom. 4: Provide a link to your published lan

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creativeklick
4 years ago

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