Replies posted by jbragg

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lukeyconrad27
posted in Landing Page Review

Feedback on my PPC campaign landing page

I do really like the page! But here are some recommendations! Favicon. Adding one will help gain user trust before the page even loads I find the chat box super distracting. While I do love the hero (especially the image) I do find it really text heavy. The text also in the subheading is very similar, I didn’t even notice right away that there were bolded words. This isn’t a bad thing but it didn’t stand out to me as a ‘keyword’. I really love the photo of the man, but I do wonder if he is a little too goofy? that is more of a nitpick but just something to keep in mind. I would increase the text size on the CTA button. Although the button stands out, I find the text a little small and almost like an afterthought instead of a “CLICK ME”. The section under the hero with Clearvision and Advance, why is that it’s own section? Can those logos go in the hero with the rest? can you move the rest of the logos down to that section? That could just be me being naive to the product.

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L
5 years ago
jbragg
jbragg
posted in Ask a Question

Any Hotjar users here?

@colinsa You make some really amazing points. the mouse does not equal where their eyes are. Furthermore, looking at my own habits, I tend to highlight text while I am reading which would make me look like a moron on a heat map “why is she clicking on text”

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ParaCoreMarc
5 years ago
jbragg
jbragg
posted in Ask a Question

Any Hotjar users here?

@Stefano Hey Stefano, thanks for your help! Well right now we use Report Garden for reports and basically just report on PPC platforms + google analytics. What we were hoping to do with Hotjar specifically for clients is report on the findings in order to persuade them into making changes (basically listening to us). Such as “hey I know you desperately wanted this giant block in the middle of the page against our advice, but based on this you cans see users get this far and scroll back up. can we officially lose this?” I guess with screenshots we can essentially use a secondary took like Redpen.io to annotate it

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ParaCoreMarc
5 years ago
jbragg
jbragg
posted in Ask a Question

Changing the leads email (actual email, not send address)?

@Caroline You = Awesome

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jbragg
5 years ago
Jess
Unbouncer
JessFormer Community Manager @ Unbounce
posted in Industry Best Practices & Strategy

Page speed AMA!

Following along!

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Moclin
4 years ago
Coffee
Coffee
posted in Landing Page Review

Would love some feedback for better conversions

I love how simple this is! you have just enough information without overwhelming users. The PDF download button is a little pixelated. Pixelation just kind of makes things look a little sketchy. Are all the form fields necessary to have there? If not, I would remove City and phone number. keep is as short as possible. Name, company, email. I do find the LP just a tad boring, I would try playing around with some texture, or a paralax, or a false bottom / angled section. The CTA at the bottom of the page “book a free demo” takes users off the page. This isn’t the best idea as you are directing users off the page so they are less likely to convert. I would change that to be a button which scrolls them back up to the form. Same thing with the “see products” button. I would suggest having a collapsible section. Then users can stay right on the page and hide/show the section as they please. I would test having the form in a Lightbox or even in a separate section, instead of having it all in

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Nicholas
5 years ago
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tanyae
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback please - http://personalfuneralcover.com/pfp-lp/

Glad to see you again!

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5 years ago
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tanyae
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback please - http://personalfuneralcover.com/pfp-lp/

I would start by stretching the sections to be the width of the page. Right now, it has a bit of an awkward size where everything is centred and both sides of are white. It just looks like an old website that isn’t responsive. I don’t feel like the hero image best represents what you offer. I just don’t understand what the image is supposed to portray. The form is fine, I do fine the age range a little awkward. 0-44? are parents doing this for their children? If you are 16 can you do this for yourself? If you are underage do you need a parents consent? The “get a quote” button at the bottom of the page doesn’t have any script or anything on it - when you click it, it doesn’t scroll you up to the form or open a lightbox. It just appears to be a button that doesn’t do anything. I would space out the sections just a little bit more. Maybe even try some false bottom/angled section. Right now, I just feel like there is a lot of information very closely stacked together. Favicon, to build t

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5 years ago
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matthewn115
posted in Uncategorized

Google Ads Hubspot Intergration + Unbounce (Unbounce pages not tracking with integration)

I am not entirely sure about this, since I use Google Analytics. Just spewing ideas - could you use a custom UTM on your Google Ads URL ?

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jbragg
5 years ago
LPphilanthropist
LPphilanthropist
posted in Landing Page Review

Please give honest feedback for this landing page for charity

There is a lot of really great aspects to the page! I am just going to be nit picking, because honestly, it’s not that bad at all! FB Ads, in my experience always produce a really high bounce rate, so the best thing I have found is to have a super enticing hero, with minimal text. I find the text in your hero slightly difficult to read, I would suggest an overlay on the whole image just to make the text easier to read. There is also a great deal of text on the page. It’s fine, just over whelming. I would suggest some collapsible sections and then if a user wants to read more they can expand it. The logos of the forms of payment are pixelated on my end, which is a bit of a red flag. When clicking on “contribute to a better africa” CTA and it redirects, I notice the colour red isn’t consistent, which is slightly confusing. Is it the main website? Is it an affiliate? As a user I think consistency is best. As the main website is a non-profit I would highlight that as well on the LP. The “t

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jbragg
5 years ago
Jess
Unbouncer
JessFormer Community Manager @ Unbounce
posted in News and Announcements

Unbounce Slack channel? 🤔

Did this die off?!?!

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Earthtrack_Group
2 years ago
mfisher
mfisher
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback Display Ad LP

Right off the bat, the first thing I notice is that the page doesn’t take over my full screen. I would say about 1/4 of my screen is an off-white section of nothingness. I like the page and the idea of it all! when I click on “get solution” and it takes me to a second page, there are a lot of options to click on. The video, Get My Video cta, the second video, more solutions. It is a little overwhelming on what I am supposed to do. Maybe adding text directing users to watch the video and then different arrows pointing to the steps. Basically mapping out for the user what we are supposed to do. The number on the second page is not clickable. I would add a favicon to gain trust before your page loads.

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Nicholas
5 years ago
mfisher
mfisher
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback: Paid Search

I think this is a pretty good base! I would have a full hero section - this could be personal preference, but I also have had success with full screen heros. I would run an a/b test having the form in a lightbox. I find I usually get a 20% increase in conversions by moving the form to the lightbox. with having it in a lightbox as well you can see the drop off rate by the number of users clicking on the lighbox vs number of users actually filling out the form. It kind of gives you an idea if there is something with the form you need to change up. Lately, if you put the form in a lightbox I would also have a section at the bottom of the page as well with a CTA. Is the testimonial image a stock image? It just doesn’t seem overly trustworthy to me. I really like the document scanning section but I would like it higher on the page so I know exactly how this works without having to go through the whole page. I would add some information to the Footer (company name, address, logo, etc) just t

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5 years ago
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lukeyconrad27
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback Please - Course Submissions

The video was very pixelated. I would add an overlay to the hero to make the text stand out. I feel like the video and the text are competing and I am unsure what I am supposed to look at. I find the course section a little overwhelming. There are just so many options. I would have the Request More Information form in its own section instead of to the side. Again, I just feel like it’s competing with the course section. In the Paralax section, the CTA bar is the same colour as the background so you can’t actually see that it’s clickable. The background is also pixelated. I am not a fan of the text background. I would probably put another overlay over the background image and had dark text. Or remove the background image and have it be a solid colour with coloured text. The section before the footer doesn’t have any text in it. Clicking on the course links takes me off the landing page, which means I most likely wont return to the LP to convert on the form. There is a whole lot of text

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Caroline
5 years ago
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lukeyconrad27
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback please - Charity Landing Page

First off, I like the overall look of the page, and love even more what you do. Right off the bat users are it with a whole lot of text, and i find the text hard to read. I don’t understand how the ‘help with a donation’ section image applies to the page. That confused me a little bit. Clicking on the Learn More links take me off the page, which is against best practices. It could also be me, but the new website took forever to load. There are two CTAs in the hero, I am unsure what I am supposed to do. Honestly though, design wise the page is good, just a whole lot of text that I really don’t want to read.

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5 years ago

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