Replies posted by Ashwin_Satyanarayana

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Puronics
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback - Puronics

Your form has too many fields. Is there a way to reduce the number of fields? More form fields only lead to less conversions. I understand that it’d be nice to have qualified leads but maybe you could follow up with a phone call or automated emails to collect the extra information? I agree with @SeanKirby 's points. CTA can be moved up. There’s too much “process” explained. Focus on getting the lead first (you can do anything you want later). I could work with a stronger headline and a subheading. It says “premium” which is fine. But how premium? How exactly is it better than your competition? Write down your strengths, think of the features, and pull the benefits out to create your headline and sub-heading. The features section, the section under the form, could be nicely expanded with more copy, more product-related images, and such. Hope that helps.

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
4 years ago
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ferg
posted in Landing Page Review

Https://get.re-fashion.co.uk/charity-1/

Hi @ferg, Nice work with the images. I also love the charity bit while shopping for clothes. There’s promise there. But out of experience, I know that most landing pages with “Shop now” buttons only lead to sales on and off (but it’s not a sustainable way to grow your business). The sustainable way to do this is with email marketing. So, give away something for free and make people sign up. Instead of saying shop now, make the buttons lead to lightboxes which will give away a coupon code. Then, follow through with an autoresponder that delivers the coupon code (and then goes on to nurture leads with emails). These emails will in turn have the “SHOP NOW” calls to action so that everyone on your list is engaged, and you control your audience while nurturing them. Now, if you don’t want to give away discounts, that’s fine. Give something like a PDF document that explains how the charity works, who benefits from your charity, etc. The point is to give something away and built your email li

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
4 years ago
nalwi
nalwi
posted in Landing Page Review

What are your thoughts on this landing page?

Hey @nalwi, great start there with your landing page. I like that it’s short, to the point, and gets the work done (let me know how the results are coming through). I have some feedback for you: The headline can be more specific (in your case). The headline only states what your software is. The headline has a job to do (and you are not letting that happen). The headline right now: " COMMUNITY CARE SOFTWARE PLATFORM FOR HOSPITALS" doesn’t tell me what’s in it for me? Off the top of my head, I could make the Headline tell me that I can manage care services better, faster, smoother, more efficient, or probably by spending much less. So, I can test a headline as PROVIDE FASTER, MORE EFFICIENT, & SMOOTHER HEALTHCARE SERVICES WITHOUT BREAKING THE BANK For the subheading, you could actually use some of your own copy (below the hero section) to make that headline more specific and meaningful. Subheading: " Our community care software platform helps Improve the quality of care, reduce op

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justjosh
4 years ago
Josh_Patrick
Josh_Patrick
posted in Job Board

Need someone to port ClickFunnels pages to Unbounce

Josh_Patrick: Jpatrick@stge2planning.com Hi Josh, Just emailed you as well. Looking forward to hear from you. Best Ash

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Josh_Patrick
4 years ago
Konstantinos_Kalouli
Konstantinos_Kalouli
posted in Landing Page Review

Feedback on our first Unbounce created page :)

I Agree with the feedback @Nicholas gave you and I’d like to add something more: How are you tracking goals for your landing page? When I click on the “schedule button” I see that I am led to some sort of an appointment booking thing (and that’s awesome). But I hope you are marking some page (maybe the page that comes up after a booking is made) as your goal to track your conversions. – Alternatively, you can also experiment by testing an offer where you give away an actual lead magnet (a PDF, a case study?). 2. As @Nicholas rightly pointed out, I am not sure if you are testing whether or not to include your price on the landing page. From experience, I know that it’s better to have leads sign up first (get your bookings) and then nurture with email to lead them to transactions later. 3. I still can’t click on the button on the top right corner. Maybe make that clickable and use Call tracking as well? 4. Add an exit intent pop-up with some kind of an offer? Like a PDF one pager that

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Konstantinos_Kalouli
4 years ago
Ashwin_Satyanarayana
Ashwin_Satyanarayana
posted in Job Board

Get High-Converting Landing Pages Designed 🔥

You are an angel, Anthony 🙂 Will fix this now.

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
5 years ago
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Jacob_Bayer
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback http://unbouncepages.com/nexgen-landing/

Keep the privacy policy links, but make them small and as good as hidden from view (like use light fonts).

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
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RachelBlend
posted in Ask a Question

Email Opt In Data Not Being Captured - Newbie question!

What kind of data do you ask for? I am not sure what you mean by “email opt in” when you also say that you are able to capture all other data? What’s the “other” data?

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6 years ago
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John_Lloyd-Kirk
posted in Uncategorized

Combing a contact form and paypal into ONE submission?

Hi John, Formsite, for instance, allows you to create forms that you can embed on any page (including Unbounce). But then, When getting contact info is so hard now-a-days, asking for a payment upfront is a big ask. You can always ask for payments later (with just a paypal link) later. I think you should focus on getting the contact info first. Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
Even_Odegard
Even_Odegard
posted in Ask a Question

Checkbox info from Unbounce to Mailchimp

Hi Even, I have a feeling you are complicating something that should be simple. When visitors signup for your lead magnet, they are automatically enrolled into your email sequence (If you want to be nice, you can also mention that in a single line on the form where they sign up). If they don’t want to hear from you, they’ll unsubscribe. I don’t think the checkbox is actually making any difference (as in, it’s not adding any new information for CM to pick on). Field mapping is used best when you have other information you ask (like phone numbers and zip codes) that you’d like to map with CM for segmenting or for use later on. Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
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an7ncda
posted in Ask a Question

How unbounce counting the conversions on a page?

I am sure others will chip in with respect to the “logic”, but then again: please don’t use two goals on a single page. One page – one focus – one CTA – one offer – one goal.

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
alexahubley
alexahubleyFormer Unbouncer
posted in News and Announcements

Wanna Be Featured in a Customer Case Study?

Hi @alexahubley, I sent you an email. I look forward to hear from you 🙂 Ash

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Zoe_Tattersall
6 years ago
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an7ncda
posted in Ask a Question

How unbounce counting the conversions on a page?

You shouldn’t be setting two goals on a landing page. Tracking one goal is hard enough, doing two is overkill. For phone numbers (calls), you can use something like Callrail to track calls [ I’d recommend not to mark that as an Unbounce goal. I don’t think you can anyway] I don’t really know what you mean by enroll link. I am guessing you mean “enroll” when someone signs up. If yes, then you can certainly mark that as a goal for Unbounce to record it as such. Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
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Jacob_Bayer
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing page feedback http://unbouncepages.com/nexgen-landing/

Hi Jacob, A nice landing page there and I like your layout and the way you’ve set it all up. You have a video (along with video testimonials) and that’s awesome too. Your form is a multi-step form, and that’s cool. Please correct this spelling mistake: and this one (within the form field) 2. A/B Testing Suggestions: The headline The Subheading A landing page version with the video and a version without. If I were you, I’d add a little more context to the landing page. Right below the hero section (where the video and the form is), I’d add another section that explains a little more on "how you actually retrive the negative items on my credit report" Also, a little more on a few more features of your service. Best wishes Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
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Gregory_Gerla
asked in Ask a Question

Issue with Facebook pixel

I did a video earlier to address this Pixel issue. Currently using it for a few Facebook campaigns for clients and it’s working fine. You might want to check it out.

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5 years ago
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Sofian
posted in Landing Page Review

New to unbounce, simply amazing, please give feedback on our landing page

Hey @Sofian, If I were you, I’d not worry about whether or not the landing page would show up search results. I’ll leave the “how to get traffic to the landing page” to you and others who are more qualified than I am in that regard, but you should really be focusing on “conversions”. I see that you’ve pointed to your website (and not a landing page?). If you mistakenly put in your actual website and not the landing page, I sure would like to see the landing page to give you any feedback. The link you shared is of your website and while we are on it, never build a landing page with those nav links, and other links taking the attention of your visitor away from what they were supposed to do – take one action that matters to your business.

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Joe_Savitch
6 years ago
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awxfac
posted in Landing Page Review

Looking for any and all Advice! :-)

Hi @awxfac. The page looks great and you got most of all that right – the stuff I usually struggle to explain to my clients 🙂 But then, I have a lot to tell you: The RSVP Here button sits nice and on top (which is good). But there’s no heading or prompt? Attend The Event That Changes How You Do Procurement [ RSVP NOW] Finally, it should look something like this? Expand the hero section a lot more. Get that big button within the hero section itself and change the color to some other color (like orange or red) to make it pop. You’ll want to build the hero section as big as the desktop screens allow (call this hero section) and you’ll have your “You can’t miss this CTA” here on the section with the same image as the background (you can also add a dark overlay to fade the image out and bring all the focus to the text). Change the copy of the CTA button from “Submit your RSVP here” to something more contextual like “I AM IN” or “COUNT ME IN”. The section where you have al

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6 years ago
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alisa.mcphail
posted in Ask a Question

Unbounce HTML to email client

I agree with @Hristian… I am no email marketing expert but from all the digging and head banging I had to do for 17 years, I can tell that doing plain text emails brings you the best results. Use Unbounce pages for collecting emails and for generating leads. Use plain text emails for email marketing. Word Ash

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Alex_Scovell
6 years ago
Ashwin_Satyanarayana
Ashwin_Satyanarayana
posted in Ask a Question

How do we do forms like these?

Stefano: <script type=“text/javascript”> jQuery(document).ready(function() { var hints = { “name”: “Your Name*”, “email”: “Your Email*”, }; var hideHint = function(field, text){ if (jQuery(field).val() === text) { jQuery(field).val(""); jQuery(field).removeClass(‘hint’); } }; var showHint = function(field, text){ if (jQuery(field).val() === “”) { jQuery(field).val(text); jQuery(field).addClass(‘hint’); } }; var text; for (fieldName in hints) { text = hints[fieldName]; jQuery("#"+fieldName).val(text).focus((function(text) { return function() {hideHint(this, text);}; })(text)).blur((function(text) { return function() {showHint(this, text);}; })(text)).addClass(‘hint’); } var submitButton = jQuery(’#’+window.module.lp.form.data.formButtonId); var submitAction = submitButton.data(‘events’).click[0]; var field; submitButton.unbind(‘click’, submitAction); submitButton.click(function(e) { for (fieldName in hints) { field = jQuery("#"+fieldName); if (field.val() === hints[fieldName]

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digibomb
6 years ago
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Rohitme
posted in Uncategorized

How to add menu bar in landing page

Hey @Rohitme I don’t recommend you add a menu bar on your landing page. It takes the focus away from what you want your visitors to do (which is to signup). Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
Ands
Ands
posted in Uncategorized

How to add a side banner?

A side banner? On a landing page? Unless it has the main CTA on it, I’d not recommend it. Also, does the landing page really have to be that long (like the one you were pointing to?) – unless it’s a high-ticket item. Even if it was, all the pitching could happen with email while you should use landing page just to get the lead. Long or short? Test Side bar or no side bar? Test.

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LiveMNC
6 years ago
Jim_Hill
Jim_Hill
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback Appreciated

Hey @Justin – thank you so much for the shoutout. Lifetime fans of Unbounce, you see? 🙂

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
Jim_Hill
Jim_Hill
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback Appreciated

Awesome, @Jim_Hill. Let me know how it comes out. Ash

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
Jim_Hill
Jim_Hill
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback Appreciated

Hi @Jim_Hill, The headline can be removed from the banner on top. It’s taking up space while not communicating any of value to your end user. I am guessing that your visitors already clicked through from somewhere (links on blogs, ads, etc) and they came looking for OCR software. So, why mention it again like "ABBYY Optical Character Recognition Software" on such valuable space? – you’d be better off not saying anything at all. Following Dan Kennedy’s copywriting trick called PAS: Problem – Present the problem your prospect feels Agitation – Poke at that problem until it’s visceral Solution – Present your solution to the agitated problem Would you be better off if you tested two sets of headlines and sub-headings as follows [Forgive me if I misrepresent your products 🙂 ] Struggling With Documents You Can’t Find Storage For? You know office space is expensive so extra storage cabinets and rooms are ruled out. Having more documents just for the sake of having them around ma

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago
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SarahCo
posted in Landing Page Review

New to Unbounce - feedback on our first landing page would be appreciated!

To add to @digibomb fantastic advice (which I sure hope you are working on), I think you should make those headlines pop too (but not too much that you take the button’s work away). I’d recommend you leave the section on top only for your logo and a number maybe (if you do call tracking and all that). And this… digibomb: I would create more separation between content. Have each content block in its own section/panel. Use colour o images to define the breaks in each section and maybe center the copy on the age for a cleaner design and easier reading. And you were right, this thing is still loading:

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Ashwin_Satyanarayana
6 years ago

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