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JustinFormer Unbouncer
posted in News and Announcements

Announcing the Official Unbounce Experts Program

This is FANTASTIC news. Thanks for sharing Justin. I hope people see how valuable of an opportunity this is. 

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7 years ago
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Gary_Burt
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Landing page critique

Hey Gary,  Here are my thoughts…  Your title says “5 Points to Consider When Purchasing Aluminium Bi-Folding Doors…” But then you don’t list the 5 points in an easy digestible format - instead you want me to watch your video for “5min and 58 seconds” which I have absolutely no time to do.  If the 5 points are interesting and valuable, you should say them. If I’m curious and I would like you to elaborate, then I’ll watch your video. But don’t tease me and hold off on the goods.  I see how you’re trying to make it into a “letter from the president” type of format, but the layout just comes off cluttered.  Your subhead is extremely long, small in font, and generally difficult to read. Instead of “Hehku’s Aluminium Expert Steve Gives You His Top 5 Points To Consider When Choosing Which Aluminium Bi-Folding Door is Right For You.” … You could have just said “5 Points to Consider when Choosing Aluminum Bi-Folding Doors” and I would have got a much clearer message I’m a huge fan of “

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Rahul_Sharma
2 years ago
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paul_taylor
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Landing Page Review

Hey Paul,  Quick disclosure: I know nothing about your industry and had to google “NNN Definition” to find out that it means Triple Net Lease (thank you wikipedia) So with that in consideration here are my 2 cents: Before I critique your page, here are a couple questions to consider…  Are you speaking to and connecting with the needs of your target audience?  Clearly, I’m not someone who would complete your form. But is your content/offer clear WHO it is for? Are you targeting real-estate agents, franchise owners, investors? Each of these customer segments may have a need for your offer, but they’re REASON for wanting it is different.  How are you driving traffic to your site? You need to ensure that the message/offer your sending at the point of acquisition (email, ppc, social media etc…) is in line with the offer on your landing page. Now for my critique of your page…   Value Proposition Not Clear: I see your process but the BENEFITS of your list are not clear - what does it incl

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Sina_Fak
8 years ago
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Jonathan_Shyman
posted in Uncategorized

Help with my first landing page for my new business

Hello Jonathan, Interesting website! Here are my thoughts: 1.) Website of life coacher is and should always be enticing with all the combination of images and texts. Because you are attracting people to know more and understand more about life. Maybe posting a questions or a quote.  2.) And life coaching is a broad topic and chopping it into pieces will give your visitors an idea of things about some aspects of life.  3.) Maybe the procedure on how you facilatate the coaching is a nice one to be included in your website.  If you want to know more about developing a website that generate revenue, please visit http://happyboxsolutions.com/ Hope this helps! Regards, Sina

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Stefano
8 years ago
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Laurence_Martin
posted in Uncategorized

Need feedback on first landing page please!

Hi Laurence.  I see a lot of opportunities to improve your landing page.  Here are some of my thoughts: You mentioned your conversion objective was for people to a) call you and b) fill out the form I think you should have your landing page 100% laser focused on 1 single objective - either form fills or phone calls… not both at the same time. This is something that you could easily A/B test and see which one produces better results.  Also I don’t see any forms to fill… Are you referring to your “View Plans” button? Because when I click on “View Plans” it simply reloads the page at this URL http://trial.theanswervirtual.com/#lp-pom-box-235 You sell a virtual receptionist service right? … Well if you’re conversion goal is phone call, then why don’t you put in a call-to-action  “Call us now and experience one of our virtual receptionists today” or something like that Your CTA in your nav bar is really not enticing “Click to Call today”. I’m thinking. Who are you? And why am I calling

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8 years ago
Jim_Wacksman
Jim_Wacksman
posted in Uncategorized

When (if ever) should you add the price to the top of a landing page?

Hey Jim, Cool product. I like how you packaged an “all-in-one” video solution for conferences.  I’m pretty familiar with video production myself. And I know that you’re price is very reasonable for what you’re offering. I’m actually curious how you can afford to do it at such a low cost considering all the post-production work that’s involved and the fact you need to travel to film the conference on-site 😉 That being said - not everyone is as well versed in video production as I am.  Here are my thoughts:  When I first landed on your page, I wasn’t instantly clear on what you were offering.  Your header is good. But you lost me a bit in your sub-header… You tell me “Six must-have videos to increase engagement and revenue for only $9900.” but you don’t tell me increase engagement and revenue of WHAT.  It might seem obvious because you mentioned “The Ultimate Conference Video Package” in your header, but there was a major disconnect for me here. I would even consider switching it

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Jim_Wacksman
8 years ago

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