Replies posted by marketyourcorp

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ninadethaey
ninadethaey
posted in Landing Page Review

Looking for feedback on B2B landing page (PropTech Startup)

Looks much better!

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5 years ago
ninadethaey
ninadethaey
posted in Landing Page Review

Looking for feedback on B2B landing page (PropTech Startup)

Anytime! Looking forward to see your revisions.

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M
5 years ago
garyld1962
garyld1962
posted in Landing Page Review

Landing Page Feedback for PPC

Your desktop page is a little too busy and come across a little overwhelming ,too wordy and to many icons/logos. Some of your text is also off center. You can accomplish more above the fold with a good slider with some good graphics and a few different calls to action. Your process icons are too large and a little blurry, also they could be numbered. Your footer could be cleaned up and made smaller with smaller logos. Also you don’t need another logo for your company on the bottom left. I do like your mobile page better than your desktop. If your clients are older you may want to use some higher contrast colors. Your risk free 30 day trial is also a good call to action. Your testimonials need to be cleaned up a little better on the mobile version. If you are pushing local traffic you might want to include a Google Maps embed code. Also we are a local South Florida Certified Google Partner if you ever need another set of eyeballs to look at your Google Ads setup. Good luck!

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garyld1962
5 years ago
ninadethaey
ninadethaey
posted in Landing Page Review

Looking for feedback on B2B landing page (PropTech Startup)

If it were me I would A/B test a version that utilizes your space better with a wider full width image or even parallax image, I think showing the pies photo doesn’t apply as it seems like a retail store. Maybe show happy office people as opposed to the “listing view” one might see when using your app or service. You are using a ton of real estate with a tall top black banner and your font is also really big. If you tighten that all up you could get some better above the fold content showing. Maybe a version with a phone number if you are accepting calls as leads. Also maybe “Why would YOU share YOUR office space” messaging might be focused on the prospect better. Also maybe try a different button color, they are getting a little lost in the everything is yellow look"

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5 years ago

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