If it were me I would A/B test a version that utilizes your space better with a wider full width image or even parallax image, I think showing the pies photo doesn’t apply as it seems like a retail store. Maybe show happy office people as opposed to the “listing view” one might see when using your app or service. You are using a ton of real estate with a tall top black banner and your font is also really big. If you tighten that all up you could get some better above the fold content showing. Maybe a version with a phone number if you are accepting calls as leads. Also maybe “Why would YOU share YOUR office space” messaging might be focused on the prospect better. Also maybe try a different button color, they are getting a little lost in the everything is yellow look"

I suggest finding out what the true benefits are to an office space owner. Call a few? Do some informational interviews?

My first reaction to the LP is that it is long. This is such a new concept, that I suggest using a lead magnet of some type. Have the prospect take baby steps.

Finally, I went to your website. You use the word “heros”. What does that mean. I wouldn’t use any slang or made up terms.

I love the idea of your business. Love it!

Thanks @icecoldmn & @marketyourcorp!

Your tips were very helpful.

Anytime! Looking forward to see your revisions.

You can check it out right now: https://join.workero.com/earn-money-sharing-your-office/

Planning to add an FAQ as well.

Nina

Looks much better!