Replies posted by michaeljhass99

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michaeljhass99
posted in Landing Page Review

Improve My Landing Page

I made the change you suggested and shortened it up a bit removing “Avoid These” and “To Help Improve”. The copy now reads: “5 Investment Mistakes People Make Reducing Their Retirement Lifestyle” as I was looking for the shortest copy to convey my message. I’m told the shorter, the better. Also I do have 3 variants of this landing page and I have been using the “Smart Traffic” function. What do you think? Michael

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Malik
3 years ago
Jess
Unbouncer
JessFormer Community Manager @ Unbounce
posted in News and Announcements

So, You Think You Can Convert? 💥

I have tossed my landing page into the mix and I sure would love to be the one you pick. I started my project about 8 months ago which involved more than the 5 page funnel I created on Unbounce. The reason I need my landing page and the four other pages to perform better is because I can no longer see clients in the office or do seminars as I seem to wind up in the hospital quite frequently (In recovery from surgery as i write this…). However, conducting phone or Zoom meetings are very do-able for me. I don’t mean to give you a sob story because I am a very positive and driven person but I have to deal with the reality that digital marketing is the only way for me to proceed forward. Pick Me! (you guys and Unbounce are awesome!) Michael

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rudolphdaniel674
3 years ago
Jess
Unbouncer
JessFormer Community Manager @ Unbounce
posted in News and Announcements

So, You Think You Can Convert? 💥

I am interested, count me in PLEASE!!! https://app.unbounce.com/3058801/pages/84351865-aee2-446b-b063-0ae6baaac75e/overview Michael Hass

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rudolphdaniel674
3 years ago
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michaeljhass99
posted in Landing Page Review

What can I do to get people from my landing page to take the next little step?

Thank you for your fast response! I did go in and clean it up and shorten the text so they can see immediately that the offer is a Free Training video. There is one sentence that I left in but I could remove if your think it would be better to do so. The text: “Avoid the biggest problems in retirement planning today using Financial Planning 2.0!” I left it there because “Financial Planning 2.0” is my proprietary product/service that I offer that nobody else has and I’m an using it as an enticement. But again if you think it would look better, I can remove it. All the disclosure stuff below that is required to be there per my compliance department and cannot be removed. However, my Google Analytics shows me that 95% of all my traffic to my website is on smart phones and when you arrive on this landing page, you see all the important stuff that I shortened up and you have to scroll down to see the disclosures so it looks very clean upon arriving at the landing page. Also, I originally ha

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SeanKirby
3 years ago

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