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Feedback on Landing Page

I would love to get your feedback on our landing page. We are most concerned about the language that we are using on the page. Specifically, the first few lines that make the initial sell to the viewer (the first place eyes go). If you would like any more information on what we do to give us better and more accurate guidance, just let me know.  Here is the link to our page: http://www.notifynearby.com My primary concern is changing the lines: “See the latest information from over 120 brands in a single app” and “A place where shoppers go to see content from the brands they love!”  Some ideas I have gotten are to call content the “Inside Scoop”  I will give you a very high level overview here: We are launching a fashion content app that gives shoppers a single place to browse content being showcased by the retailers they love shopping at. We use beacons technology to drive foot traffic for retailers and engage customers as they are shopping. Let me know what you think. 

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