I have created a New Landing page for CBD

  • 21 September 2019
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I have created a Landing page for CBD
here is my Landing page URL
http://unbouncepages.com/cbdlandingpage/

I need feedback, how I can improve my Landing page.

If anyone looking for like that page please contact with me:
$kype id: sanjeevthakur0312
Email id: sanjeev.thakur58@gmail.com


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I took a quick look and these are just a few quick things that could be improved in my opinion:

  • Above fold only shows a form “where to send your bottle”. This could work assuming visitors are warmed up enough by pre-sell pages, but I think you should try to give some quick hints as to what you are trying to sell ( product A that helps with problem B)
  • There are some spelling mistakes in the headings which can destroy trust
  • On mobile I’d suggest making the container wider so less scrolling is required to read the texts

Hello RobertZ

Thanks for your feedback.
sure will do that soon.

Regards

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Hi there! Thanks for sharing your page.

Important question, is the bottle free?

Most visitors (like myself) quickly skim a page to see if it solves a particular pain point or need.

Unfortunately it wasn’t very clear tor me what to expect by filling out the form.

Will you send me a free sample? Will I need to pay for something eventually?

Also, consider showing the lab test results as this can help with trust (THC amounts etc.).

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