Feedback on pre-launch landing page please!

All great points by Leeann. I’ll add a couple of quick things on design specially that you can AB test.

1. There seems to be an extra row between the header and the slider. Perhaps get rid of that row and increase the header height to keep it spacious.
2. Your slider doesnt move on its own and the navigation arrows are below the fold but you have great points on both sliders talking about product benefit. I’d suggest to use just 1 slide - divide it into 2 halves and right the benefits on either side with (1) and (2). Have the product image in the middle such that the product divides the 2 slider into 2 parts. Then have the sign up form right there with a better call to action copy like -
   “Get on wholesale price forever. Sign up.” or something similar.

Hope thats helpful!

thank you leeann, this is awesome!!

i have one question. do you think people generally understand what “wholesale” means? I heard from a friend that they might not get it if they’re not familiar with ecommerce.