New business new landing page and I could use constructive criticism

[Thoward]

http://unbouncepages.com/veda-lightbox-599/
This will be fed from social media. Goal is to get basic demographics with email and phone number which will be used to set up a no obligation tour of the facility.
Thanks for the input.
Tod

[Hristian]

Hi @Thoward,

The link you’ve provided seems to be broken.

Best,
Hristian