1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible
My page is published, but i am a complete amateur, i could use the opinion of others. Will it convert for my offer, or are there obvious issues that someone with more experience does notice. I have noticed my mobile version is not complete. But do comment on the desktop version. I will find some time and update the mobile version.
Another issue is that my page is rather brightly coloured. Most others i have seen avoid that the bright colours. Dont know if it is a choice or its what helps conversions. Do comment on that. And the fact that the top right of my page appears crowded. I am yet to buy a domain for my page but will do so soonest.
2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
Adwords, also plan to use bing and facebook ads.
3: What is your conversion goal?
4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: