Https://www.bloomoonapps.com


#1

Please review my landing page!

https://www.bloomoonapps.com


#2

Hi Assel_Zhakupova,

I took a look at your page and have a few comments/suggestions.

  • The first thing I want to note is that the words “perfectly created beauty routine” take you away from the landing page within the first few seconds of being there which could hinder conversions.

  • As you scroll down the page it might be beneficial to call out your first set of bullets more by maybe putting them in their own section separate from the header or just make them feel a little bit more integrated into the header so it creates an easier reading experience.

  • In the bottom section I find it confusing to have so many words highlighted in a blue color. At first I thought they were links. If you want to call those words out maybe don’t use blue since it tends to be associated with being an active link.

Hope this helps, good luck on your project.