Feedback on my video offer

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible

Hello… I’ve created a video outlining my offer and would really appreciate some objective feedback, especially if you have had success in marketing. I thought my campaign would have been more successful in generating clients by now and would benefit from some insight. Thank you in advance if you have time! The link to my video is:

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?

Facebook ads, post boosts and email campaigns which include the link

3: What is your conversion goal?


4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: