Feedback on my landing page, Please


1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible
I get a lot of traffic on to my website but I do not conversion to to sign up with their email. I get a 1000 people visit my website but only get 1 to 2, people sign up every other day.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
Facebook ads

3: What is your conversion goal?
20 percent of all of the traffic

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:


Hi Jaime,

Here’s a video with some feedback:

Good luck!



Thank you so much for responding back to me, I greatly appreciated. All of your recommendations were insightful and enlightening. I will take your advice and adjust my landing page.


Awesome! Best of luck with everything!