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Tealady48
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Second attempt at creating a page - am I on the right track?

Hi all I created my first page a few weeks ago and asked for feedback. I then decided from some fabulous suggestions to scrap the format and start again. So here’s my second attempt: http://chezdechez.com/languedoc-prope… How does it look? Any suggestions as to the user experience, or any changes that you think would provide a clearer call to action? I think I maybe should add in more sections but I don’t know at what point it starts to become overkill. As you can tell, I’m still really unsure, so any feedback would be very gratefully received. Thanks Deb

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Jim_Hill
7 years ago
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Tealady48
posted in Landing Page Review

Another Newbie! Am I on the right track?

Hi, I’ve just created my first unbounce page: http://chezdechez.com/languedoc-prope… . However, I’m not sure whether I’m on the right track or not. I run a property search agency for people looking to buy properties in France and I’m not sure that the page I’ve created is inspiring enough, or provides enough information to make people want to find out more. My main site: ,http://chezdechez.com/ has a couple of hundred properties and loads of information, so I want to keep things simple but think that maybe I’ve gone too far down the minimalist route!! Any ideas, suggestions very very welcome. Thanks

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7 years ago

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