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Shyma_Khaki
posted in Landing Page Review

New to landing pages and would love some feedback please!

@Jess it definitely was brilliant feedback! Really helpful @Nicholas do let me know how the new pages look (links in previous post) and if there’s anything else I should change 🙂 Thank you!

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Nicholas
7 years ago
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Shyma_Khaki
posted in Landing Page Review

New to landing pages and would love some feedback please!

Hi Nicholas, Have tried to implemented as many of the changes as possible, and I’m actually liking this version a lot better! 🙂 Here they are: For warm leads via email (click-through): http://www.thebusinesscoach.ae/sixstepsworkshop/ For cold traffic via PPC (lead generation): http://www.thebusinesscoach.ae/thesixstepsworkshop/ I also have a quick question with regards to the lead generation version - is it possible to have the CTA in more than one place? I’ve tried adding additional buttons/duplicate the form but I think they start acting like two different CTAs. Many thanks for your help, Shyma

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Nicholas
7 years ago
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Shyma_Khaki
posted in Landing Page Review

New to landing pages and would love some feedback please!

Oh wow, Nicholas - thank you so much for the brilliant feedback! Really valuable advice there and I can already see where some changes would help. At the moment this page is getting warm leads via email, although once this page is running smoothly, I’d like to create a similar landing page for cold traffic (PPC, FB Ads) with a lead generation form. I’m going to start off by replacing the stock image, and by making the section above the fold clearer. I don’t think I’m using that space to it’s full advantage at the moment, so hopefully some tweaks will help. And going to try and make that CTA more actionable. I’d love for you to have one more look once I’ve made all the changes, if that’s okay? 🙂 Thanks so much for your time.

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Nicholas
7 years ago

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