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astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Sean, Thank you very much indeed for the advice!!! I have removed several testimonials. I also have removed the video as it was too Lon. I’m in the process to making a shorter on and will re upload it. On another note, I have a notification saying my sentences are too long, I’m learning lets see if I can further reduce it and make it punchier! So much to do and no conversions…. I hope I’ll get there! Kind regards, Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Sean, I have updated the landing page. (I wasn’t able to work on it at all in the last 6 weeks due to ill health), but I’m back on it! I have revised quite a few things, such as images, reducing the text quite a lot. But I have a ton of testimonials and I don’t know if this should be all in there or if it affects the word count for conversion. I would be grateful for your feedback. Many thanks, Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Zoe, I understand I need to make a ton of changes, I need to make this work! How much do you charge to help me get this right? Kind regards, Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Sorry Zoe, I didn’t see the bottom of your email! Spinning head today!!! I am super broke atm, but I’m interested in knowing how much would you charge? Super thanks!! Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Zoe, Thank you so much for taking the time to write to me! I really appreciate all the points Sean has mentioned and now adding to yours, I can start seeing how much I need to get this right! I will work on it over the weekend and adjust it as much as possible. I just don’t understand what you mean by these two points: Create a separate section for the details on what the package offers, with another CTA button here that links to back up to the form. ( are you suggesting I delete the bottom of the page where those details are and add a button to drive the customer to these details?) Again, some icons to illustrate here would be good, even just check marks. Keep your fonts to 1-2 over the page. You’ve got a few going on here. (Do you mean the font is over the border of the page? Jesus! Definitely need to adjust that!!!

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Sorry Zoe, I didn’t see the bottom of your email! Spinning head today!!! I am super broke atm, but I’m interested in knowing how much would you charge? Super thanks!! Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Zoe, Thank you so much for taking the time to write to me! I really appreciate all the points Sean has mentioned and now adding to yours, I can start seeing how much I need to get this right! I will work on it over the weekend and adjust it as much as possible. I just don’t understand what you mean by these two points:

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astridbarney
2 years ago
astridbarney
astridbarney
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Hi Sean, Thank you so much for taking the time to write so much great advice! Is exactly what I need!! All your points are very valid and I totally get it! But I needed someone to guide me. I will work on these pants over the weekend and improved as much as possible! I’m really grateful for your tips! Kind regards, Astrid

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astridbarney
2 years ago

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