Replies posted by Dean_Horvath

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Todor_Minev
posted in Landing Page Review

Guys! I think we did it this time! Please have look!

Beautiful page! I think you can get a huge boost with a couple of tweaks. I agree with the other writers, the CTA box should be in a different colour. The blue box blends in with the rest of the page. More importantly, I think you’re headline is missing the most important part of your message. When I first looked, I assumed this was just another teeth whitener, no different than the Crest strips I’ve got at home. It wasn’t until I read the second paragraph under your team picture when I realized the true difference in your product. Crest strips can’t be sold in Europe because of hydrogen peroxide. Peroxide damages your enamel. Your product doesn’t have it! THAT’s what you should be leading with! Most people won’t scroll all the way to read the fine print. By the look of your headline now, it seems like your only advantage over Crest is price. “$12.99” is what catches my eye, not the clear benefit of no peroxide.  You clearly have a better product than others in the US market. I’d lead

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Joe
7 years ago
chris.geoghegan
chris.geoghegan
posted in Uncategorized

How do you prevent spam submissions on your landing page form?

I’d love to hear an update as well.

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D
9 years ago

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