Replies posted by davie_zone

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davie_zone
posted in Landing Page Review

Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

Hi Nicholas Thanks again. These insights are invaluable. After looking so long I have tunnel vision. This has just given me lots of new projects to work on. Mainly copy and storeside. I cant thank you enough… David

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BradW
6 years ago
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davie_zone
posted in Landing Page Review

Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

Hi Brad Thanks for the added feedback . So to confirma . Lost the sticky bar ?? My logo does not need to be stuck up there. How much for a rewrite of the copy. If this is something you can do for a reasonable outlay I may also have an ebook that I would waant rewritten . I have had a free ebook written as a lead magnet but need it edited to include benefits and create a need etc. I just had a basic ebook fleshed out and now need it to sell for future planned facebook campaigns. (as soon as I learn myself lol). ALSO My mobile version of the page performed miserably to the point I disabled mobile completely . Would you be willing to take on that project on the basis of a large sum if you could make it profitable ? Kind regards David

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BradW
6 years ago
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davie_zone
posted in Landing Page Review

Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

Hi Nicholas Also one more thing. Just checking the stats on the video . Ive had around 4000 clicks since I uploaded the explainer and nearly 300 plays. 8% play rate and 86% engagement. Do you think that is poor ? Should I move it down the page or get rid of it all together? regards David

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BradW
6 years ago
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davie_zone
posted in Landing Page Review

Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

Hi Nicoholas Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate you taking the time out on this. Everything you said makes sense. I am getting a lot of clicks to the store compared to the sales so I think the store needs a lot more work. I think i will definitely go with your advice and take people directly to the item. Is there any other things with the store I should know about . this a world I haven’t looked at yet. Also I have received another video saying the direct response copy is too harsh. Because it’s a medical site I should go for a much less in your face and much more caring empathetic approach. This sort of makes sense to me . just wondered what you think. Direct response works but does it make the site seem a little scammy ?? It was a comment i received in hotjar . Thanks again for you time . Cant wait to implement this stuff

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BradW
6 years ago
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davie_zone
posted in Landing Page Review

Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

Hi Brad Thank you so much for taking the time to do that. I totally get what you mean about the aggressive tone and your right . It screams scam now that I look with new eyes. I have built everything myself from what I read and learn on a daily basis so copy is not my strong point but you are totally right. Do you think I need to hire a copywriter to do this properly or just tone it down myself ? With regards to the CTA at the very top . That should scroll with the customer . Is this not a successful tactic ? Do you think I should remove the sticky bar altogether ? Once again thank you so much for you time . When you are working on something so much you begin to see it through rose tinted glasses . Kind Regards David

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BradW
6 years ago

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