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nalwi
nalwi
posted in Landing Page Review

Looking for new landing page feedback

Use moving images like https://monday.com/, static screenshots on a laptop/phone look boring, generic and old fashioned, I skipped right past them. I would change the headline to a benefit, and the subheadline to features about your product (like monday). Instead of clicking a button which opens a popup form (two steps) put one form next to the button, and 4 fields is going to turn a lot of people away, and nobody wants to get calls from salespeople, so requesting a phone number will turn even more people away. If you ask for email and put a button next to the form field like monday did you will get more leads. Also, the blue video is pointless IMO, stock videos are a huge turnoff, as they scream INAUTHENTICITY, people want what’s real, not stock footage that IMO has zero to do with what you’re selling. Compare monday side by side (mobile too) with your page, then pretend you’re a customer and are looking at 2 brands selling the same thing, which one would you choose? why? BTW I’m not

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SeanKirby
4 years ago

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