1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve?

This landing page is for my facebook campaign and therefore most of my traffic is coming from mobile.

I can see by looking that it doesn’t look the best.

I have tweaked and shortened it from the desktop version which you can see by looking and it has helped greatly but would like to push it a little further

Make sure to view on mobile as this is the feedback I would like and it is very different to the desktop version

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?

Facebook

3: What is your conversion goal?

Make sales in my store

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:

ex. http://www.landingpage.com/

www.intolerancelab.co.uk/fb

Make sure to view on mobile as this is the feedback I would like and it is very different to the desktop version