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1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible

My page is published, but i am a complete amateur, i could use the opinion of others. Will it convert for my offer, or are there obvious issues that someone with more experience does notice. I have noticed my mobile version is not complete. But do comment on the desktop version. I will find some time and update the mobile version.


Another issue is that my page is rather brightly coloured. Most others i have seen avoid that the bright colours. Dont know if it is a choice or its what helps conversions. Do comment on that. And the fact that the top right of my page appears crowded. I am yet to buy a domain for my page but will do so soonest.




2: How are you driving traffic to your page?


Adwords, also plan to use bing and facebook ads.


3: What is your conversion goal?


Sale


4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:

ex. https://unbouncepages.com/infidelity-life/

The link you provided doesn’t appear to work.


I have provided a working link. Thanks.


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