Would love some feedback on my first landing page

#1

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible
Just overall feedback, target is to get people to donate.

I am working on a landing page for a charity, first time building one, i am testing 3 different openings, a countdown, a team picture and just text.
(It is a real foundation in case you find it interesting.)


2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
organic, social media


3: What is your conversion goal?


4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:
ex. http://www.landingpage.com/

http://unbouncepages.com/hearttohandle2019/

#2

Hi there,

All in all I really like the landing page. One suggestion I would have is consider removing the logo from the image banner.

I personally feel it is taking up too much page real estate and pushing other important information below the fold.

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#3

Hi! Here’s some feedback for you: https://www.loom.com/share/80b2b54bec8b4728a9e2e14860690f51

Regards,

#4

Thank you Mike. I see what you mean the logo seems repetitive…

#5

Thanks a lot Nicholas, that is amazing feedback and much more than I expected to receive. Cant say how much I learned. It is a short term project so I am limited on some areas like the actual donation page. But I will improve on design and content a lot from what you mentioned.

Thank you again!

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#6

Awesome, glad to help!