First off, welcome to the community. Hopefully we can help you start converting some of your traffic.
Overall I think the page needs more clarity, more credibility and a more conversational tone.
Let’s start with the headline. What does it mean? I could guess it means I work with my mental health professionals on my treatment plan or something else. And while the image is visually pleasing, it doesn’t make the message any clearer. People should know within a few seconds what your page is about.
The form doesn’t shed much light either. You see that it’s for an appointment. But for what? Why should someone make an appointment? What happens after submitting the information? If it’s for an appointment, how do I choose the time and day?
The explanation of neurofeedback gives some clues, but even that is too vague. How does self-regulating the nervous system help with anxiety and depression?
Be sure to include specifics to add context and credibility. One of the most effective is a vague claim. How is effectiveness defined or measured, and how does it compare specifically to alternatives? Is there a specific success rate?
Put it in terms your target audience would use in ways that are meaningful to them.
This may be a nit pick, but it’s odd to put behaviors and peak performance under a heading about conditions. Those aren’t conditions.
Those sections are also pretty stiff sounding. Most people don’t talk that way. Use a conversational tone to make it more engaging.
Comparison charts are great, but I don’t think the features you highlight have meaning to the average person.
When you get to the end, there are still too many questions and doubts left. What proof is there that this works? How much does it cost? Is it covered by insurance? What is involved? How quickly can you expect results? What happens if it doesn’t work? Are there risks or side effects? Etc.
Try to image yourself as your prospect. Forget everything your know on the subject that they wouldn’t and go from there.
Best of luck!