We'd love to get some feedback on our new Landing Page!


1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible
We help people overcome anxiety. We want more leads to build our database.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
Blogging on our site and others, FB advertising with a lead magnet to this landing page, Google Display Advertising to our website (at this stage but soon to a landing page as well)

3: What is your conversion goal?
To generate new clients via Mailchimp sign-ups

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:
ex. http://www.landingpage.com/



Hi Michelle,

Awesome page! Here’s a short video with some thoughts/feedback: https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cFivInF8RD



Hey Nicholas
Thanks so much for your feedback. We really appreciate it.

This is our very first landing page so we’re glad we’ve created a reasonable one!

Yes, the audience is women only. We’re creating a different landing page (and FB advert) for men.

This is the first time we’ve offered this lead magnet so I don’t have any “social proof” for it I’m afraid.

I will take on your advice regarding not mentioning the Signature Programme so thanks for that.

And we’ll also change the design of the social proof pieces so it stands out a bit more. You’re right, the black on pink is a bit hard to read.

Okay! Thanks!



Hi Michelle,

That all makes sense! Yes, I know how it can be difficult to get specific testimonials for a new offer, so that can certainly be something you adjust further down the road when you get people reading the guide.

I wish you the very best with your campaign. I think it’ll do quite well with the right traffic!