Overall, not a bad job on the page. I think the layout is nice and clean. The text is easy to read. And the information is organized well. You have a good testimonial for social proof, and it stands out, which is good.
The hero area does a decent job succinctly communicating what the solution is, but it could be even better if it conveyed the unique value proposition. Terms like “better than” are subjective and a bit vague unless you pay it off quickly. My first thought was, better how? And I wasn’t convinced it is.
Encryption and privacy are good to call out, but the supporting text under that doesn’t make sense. The first amendment is freedom of speech. What does that have to do with encryption and privacy?
It’s good that you have call-to-actions in multiple spots, but I would keep them to just one offer. Having to choose adds friction. These could also stand out more. At the least, I would test a more colorful button with good contrast to the rest of the page.
I don’t think there is enough info to make the pre-order offer effective anyway. 50% off doesn’t do anything if you don’t know the price to begin with. And it’s not clear what will happen once someone clicks on the button.
I hope that helps. Best of luck.