Landing page feedback


1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible

Please give me some feedback on the design and on the copywriting also between the two which one would you pick thanks in advance

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?

Google ad words

3: What is your conversion goal?

They should call me


Hi Jacob,

Here’s some quick feedback:


Good afternoon Nichols. First of all thank you so much for your time. you gave me great feedback. and I really appreciate that. Two more questions first one I hired two different designers and I didn’t get feedback on the second design landing page so want to know with which one I should move forward to make the changes. This is the one it’s not posted on on bounce second question can I hire you to do the changes on my landing page what you suggested? Thanks again for everything warm regards Jacob


One more thing. I wonder if I should place a photo from the owner instead
of the video thanks in advance


It’s hard to say which layout would be better. I’d test both. I do like the other one better, because it has trust logos in it. And I don’t think you need to include 3 video testimonials. That seems a bit much. But maybe test both and see which performs better? I’ve been surprised many times when I tested things like this, where my assumptions have been wrong.

And yes, happy to discuss helping with your landing page project. I’ll send you a direct message right now regarding that.

All the best,


Good afternoon Nichols. Sorry for bothering you again. Here is my new
content please give a look and tell me what you think? Thanks in advance


Hi Jacob, I don’t see any links or images in your new post.