Landing page Conversion help

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve?
I can get a decent amount of traffic to my page. But only like one or two conversions. I am using other landing pages from my competitors as “inspiration” but that still doesn’t seem to be working.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
Facebook ads

3: What is your conversion goal?
At least 15%

4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: :point_down:

I like the design, I can’t see much improvement in this area. Does your competitor use the same call to action?
Do most people who buy this already have an oxygen tank, or they are shopping for their first one?

Since you are using facebook to drive traffic, maybe your targeting is off? I don’t have much experience with facebook ads but perhaps your competitor has built stronger audiences or has a other layer that your not picking up on.


Most people that we are hoping to target are using oxygen tanks and looking for a less limiting option.
I will look into the audience, Thanks

Hey Chris, welcome! Here’s a short video with some feedback:


May be you should mention " No payments for up to 12 months! " , somewhere below your main copy. Or a phrase like “Free for One Year”. I think it should be seen on first sight the customer lands on your page.
Hope that helps :+1: