I also need feedback on this landing page. http://promos.puronics.com/water-softener-1/ it is converting ok but I want to improve it. Thx!


#1

I also need feedback on this landing page. http://promos.puronics.com/water-softener-1/ it is converting ok but I want to improve it. Thx!


#2

Hi Michele! Try to test these ideas:
1 Add more photos of thise filter
2 Use less questions in the form. I.e. Just name and phone(or email)
3 Add timer for your special offer.
4 http://joxi.ru/BA0njeXFDykVmy - it’s looks like a button. I tried to click it. Check your click map.
5 Move CTA form down. I’m not ready to leave my contacts before i read the description.
6 I can’t find the form after reading the description. Just button like element with your phone number.
7 In my opinion, you use too many colours
8 I would change place of filter benefits. I see it below your first screen with CTA.
9 Your icons are not in one style. Some of them are 2d and some are 3d. I would advice to try flat design icons and redesign some elements. Because there’s a difference between several elements.
10 When i read “Why Buy From Puronics?”, i look at that girl and her beutiful eyes. What about a photo of your filter? A lot of professionals recomend not to use people cliparts.

That’s my subjective opinion about your LP.

Have a great day, Michelle!


#3

Thanks Felix, I really appreciate the feedback!