Https://autoaccident.stonebridgechiromn.com/


#1

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible

Would just like to know what everyone thinks.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?

Google Adwords

3: What is your conversion goal?

Get people to call us or have us call them

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:
ex. http://www.landingpage.com/

https://autoaccident.stonebridgechiromn.com/


#2

Hey there,

It’s not too bad, there are a few design & copy things to pay attention to.

:exclamation:You definitely need to correct the mobile version :exclamation: When asking for phone-calls, mobile is of utmost importance. It looks like the phone number in the header is causing a page-width issue on mobile.

  • “Free… is a click away” You have already lied to the user. According to your form, it’s 3 clicks away. I suggest changing that title. It’s better to be honest. Try, “Get a Free Consultation by Filling out the Form Below.”
    Or, eliminate the form in the header (move it to a lower section on the page) and just use a button to “call now for a free consultation.”

  • “We Make Things Simple” … This could be more obvious with those three topics. First, put that section title in the same colored-container as the three topics. Having it within its own grey bar is awkward design. Secondly the copy is great, but to make your point more clear I have swapped some sentences. Check out the screenshot where I have edited several changes.

You could even remove the sentences, and leave the ones I put in bold :man_shrugging:

The rest of the page does it’s job :slight_smile: Hopefully those tips help. Let me know if you have any questions!


#3

Hey there,

Here’s some feedback in a short video: https://www.useloom.com/share/d87479a391f24a59bbf84a8f4f16d585

Hope it helps!