Feedback please


#1

Hello My Fellow Land-pagers,

Can you please give me honest feedback on my very first landing page project? I know the English isnt prefect. There’s no need for nasty comments on it. Please nice and honest feedback. And if you know how to a countdown timer on my unbounce account, then its perfect.

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THE MOBILE VERSION? THE MAIN HEADER IS VERY SMALL. IF I MAKE IT BIGGER, THEN IT WON’T FIT THE DESKTOP VERISON

http://unbouncepages.com/vinetrek-lightbox-346/


#2

Hey, happy to give you some constructive feedback. Here is a video I put together with some ideas and answers to your other questions too:

https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cF1X0MFfFI

Here are some of the links I mention in the video:

https://unbounce.com/landing-page-template/persuasion/

Best of luck!


#3

Could not access URL http://unbouncepages.com/vinetrek-lightbox-346/. Please fix it & let know