Feedback on my free-ebook landing page


1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible
I want to generate an email list of people that are interested in this book. My client’s seminars revolve around the same idea so the goal is to create a list of emails that can be targeted, create lookalike audiences, and email marketing campaigns together.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?
Facebook Ads

  • Social Media

3: What is your conversion goal?
200+ Emails

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:


Hi Francis, here’s a short video review of the page with some feedback:



That is awesome. Thank you for the feedback. I currently have 400+ visits but zero conversion. Do you think there are targeting issues involved as well or is this purely refining the landing page?


What type of targeting are you using at the moment? Can you share a sample ad? Hard to say without seeing it, but yes, that could be an issue.


Custom Audience

Interest Targeting around local areas

I don’t manage the ads per say but I have a birds eye view on some of them.