Critiquing Service available?


I have contributed a ton of time and effort to making my landing pages the best they can be within the client requests I’m given. I find that some pages really take off (20% conversion) and others fall flat with a .2% conversion rate. The framing and style are hardly that different, yet the results are miles apart.

I would love to see some way to get general feedback on a design or some sort of critiquing process. Does this already exist? If so, I can’t seem to find it.

Looking for advice on improving this LP layout.