Convertible Feedback. Can you help?

Hey Ashwin!

Firstly, purely from a design standpoint, I love this! I love the colours and the layout and the minimalist design. I guess my only feedback right off the bat might be to do more with the image on the left. It looks a bit incomplete with the phone being cut off in the middle. There’s definitely potential for something with a bit more detail.

Secondly, I think it helps to know how you’re using this Convertable. How is it being triggered? Would you be willing to send the landing page that you’ve applied this to? That way it gives a lot more for us to work with when we’re giving feedback.

I know a lot of our customers have seen a ton of success using Convertables, but I think it’s more than pure design that makes it effective. I’d like to loop in @digibomb and @Finge as they’re my go-to guys for Convertables right now 😁

Cheers!

Hi there. Cool design!

I would make a few changes.

1. Not sure the iPhone image adds any value as it pretty much repeats what is already said in the headline. Remove it and replace it with what you have on the right half of it.
2. Instead of having a click-through button I would add a form with the 2 form fields from your landing page in your now new clean canvas on the right half

Hope this helps 🙂

Completely agree with @Finge the only other thing I would suggest is maybe adding a picture of a person. Something relative.

And though I agree with @Fingein regards to adding a form, a clickthrough can work here too as long as you’re sending them to another page that has added value like maybe a video or something, or screens of the tools, examples, etc.

There are some great places to source images that can be used copyright free. I like unsplash or maybe a really nice icon of some kind. Just a thought 🙂

Hey Ash! If you’re willing, I’d love to see the finished product! Very curious!