I agree with Denise on the above points. I would definitely pick up on her point about 1:1 attention ratio.
And make sure the CTA pops - here is one example where your attention is immediately drawn to the “Try it free today” CTA, http://www.getballpark.com. While ghost buttons is a big trend these days we (ConversionLab) have performed A/B tests where they heavily underperform vs CTAs that stand out more with contrast like the one for Ballpark.
Also make sure you remove any kind of leaks from your main goal of the page (getting people to get in touch). Unfortunately I see footer elements such as Twitter, Facebook etc. in too many templates on Themeforest, and I would recommend removing them. Just another distraction. Add them to your confirmation page instead
Seems like the “Learn More” buttons in the About us section has no real purpose - so would get rid of those
Even though this is a template I would also put some work into the headline, make a value proposition. The headline should define the page and tell me 1) what I get, and 2) what’s in it for me. It could be “Get great photos from your events” or something similar.