Advice, opinions and feedback on landing page please. Thank you


1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve?

Looking for overall clarity, tone and trust feedback.

2: How are you driving traffic to your page?

Referrals and FB paid visits

3: What is your conversion goal?
Calls to learn more- suggestions welcome as to best way to convert interested parties.

4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable:


Hey there,

Here’s a short (private, unlisted) video review of your page with some feedback:

Let me know if you have any questions. Good luck!


Hi Nicholas,

Thanks so much for your great video. I’ll begin working on what you’ve said immediately.