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Landing Page Feedback Appreciated

This is a landing page which we use for some more generic keywords to market OCR software. Can I get some feedback please? For this one we are not using a visible CTA as the page was just getting too busy. Here goes: The OCR Experts This is page which gives a high level overview of three different software products. We have landing pages for each of these but do not link them to it, at least yet. We do have another page which performs well in which we do link the other software products to it. One for handwriting, check mark, text OCR, and invoice processing. Thanks so much everyone! Jim Hill

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Landing Page Newbie! Please offer feedback

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible Hello! This is my first website/landing page attempt. I’ve tried to follow all the advice I can find on Unbounce and elsewhere, but I’m a newbie… 🙂 I’d love some feedback on how to improve it. This page has not been advertised yet, and is not yet linked to my membership site or any CRM. I should also add that I have not set up the mobile responsive view yet. I want to try and see if I’m on the right track first. I’m trying to nail my design before that stage. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? I will first take some targeted Facebook ads to drive a small amount of traffic to test conversion. Once I’m happy with that I will use Facebook and AdWords to drive traffic to a viral contest. At the end of the contest, participants will be directed to a version of this page that will announce the winner and make a special offer for entering the contest. They will have 72 hours to make the pu

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Landing Page feedback - need help getting more conversions!

Hi all, This landing page is getting a good amount of highly targeted keywords, yet does not seem to convert too well. Any feedback as to how we can make it better or test ideas out is highly appreciated ! http://www.willnorth.org/brooklyn-elementary-school/ Thanks!

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Feedback on Landing Page Wireframe please

Hi All, Just wanted to get some feedback on a landing page wireframe I have drafted up in sketch. It represents my business idea which is designing landing pages as a service for small business owners and entrepreneurs that either don’t want the hassle of doing it themselves or don’t have the time or budget of hiring an agency. So that’s where I would come in to help them promote their products and services using a combination of my design and branding experience and implementing some of the marketing and persuasion tactics that I have picked up from Unbounce blogs and workshops - something that the average non-designer client will not have a clue about. In terms of where this idea sits the market place I guess it falls in between someone who is already proficient in using Unbounce and knows what they are doing and a big design agency who only work with larger businesses with bigger budgets which would be outside the bracket of what a small business owner could afford. So this is som

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Feedback on my page

I just published my page, I completely new at this. My goal is to get people to take action to book sessions with me. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Here is my page: https://www.realignyoursoul.co.uk Thanks, Astrid

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Landing page feedback please! 🏆

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible I’m wanting to start some A/B testing again on my business’s landing page. 5 years later, and many, many iterations – I’m so close to it, and I would love some fresh eyes and opinions! Specifically around any A/B test ideas or even just general feedback would be amazing. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? We have brand partners throughout Australia and worldwide that generate traffic. I want to generate more traffic again via Facebook or Instagram ads, but need to get the conversion rate up first. 3: What is your conversion goal? Form completion for lead generation. 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: The Complete Detox Cleanse Nourish The Complete Detox Cleanse Nourish Program - BLOG Delicious, nourishing recipes. Nutrition tips. Healthy lifestyle.

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Feedback on my page and why conversions are blank?

Hi, So i could use some feedback on these pages. I am getting some material done now such as an explainer video and a few custom images but i have done a few different variations and when i send Display traffic, it was converting but at a very low rate and they were always blank. I am going to try some different variations but i have gone through my first month and i do think i will sign up. But I could really use some help on conversions. I spent a lot of money on display advertising to test pages but i am also worried display might be not the best traffic. Thanks in advance for any help. www.bdaas.co and http://try.bdaas.co/

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Birthing classes landing page critiques/feedback

So apparently, we can post our landing page here and get tomatoes thrown at us 😉 No but seriously, I’m looking for honest feedback. Let yourself loose. This is my first landing page ever! My landing page: https://birthingclasses.rockthecradle.ca/rockstaredition/ We sell online birthing classes. Our target market is pregnant women between 24 and 35 years old who feel overwhelmed by the amount of information out there and who want all the essentials in one neatly packaged birthing class. Our first campaign will be a Google Ads campaign targeting New York, Boston, Austin and San Francisco. We chose those cities because they have a positive birth culture (less medical interventions, more doulas, less planned c-sections, etc). If you know other cities where our birthing classes would sell, let me know. My conversion goal is simple: get expecting moms to buy the class! So please let me know what you think about the look and feel, the design, the text, the pictures, the video, the len

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Requesting landing page feedback. All feedback greatly appreciated

softwareaudits.com Hi - This is our first landing page attempt. This is for lead generation for companies facing a Microsoft or Oracle software licensing audit. Desktop + mobile. Traffic will be from web banners and any other ways that might work (i.e. LinkedIn, keywords, etc.). Our team is comprised of former MS and Oracle audits so we have unique experience and insight helping companies (I ran Microsoft’s - end customer compliance program for 10 yrs+). All feedback on the landing page is greatly appreciated (we are not marketing or lead generation folks and need all the help we can get). Thanks again. Bruce

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Landing page feedback for online instructor lead training company

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible The look and feel of the page The content and the form on the top section. goal is for the user to convert and buy Anything else that might help 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Social Media Google Ads 3: What is your conversion goal? User to buy the training 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: https://training.conceptsandbeyond.com/csm/

ChurchillKnight

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No conversions on my landing page yet

Hi there, I created my first landing page, which I know won’t be perfect… but I need a bit of feedback on it. We’ve only had around 45 visitors, and it only went up yesterday (or the other day, can’t quite remember) but there aren’t conversions yet. It was quite a lengthy page to begin with, so i made some minor adjustments to move the form up the fold. I want to get some feedback on the page itself so i can sort of perfect that and eventually rule out that it’s not the landing page that’s ‘wrong’, and then we can make other adjustments in our campaign. Don’t know if this is possible, but any feedback on the page will be great! It is being A/B tested as well FYI (at the moment it’s just different phrases on the CTA buttons - question vs action statement). Here’s the link: http://try.churchill-knight.co.uk/benefits-of-contractor-accountant/ Newbie Alex 🙂

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Trying to get a converting LP (lead gen.)

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible Build an high converting LP. We are looking for companies that need a machine for sheet metal. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google AdWords 3: What is your conversion goal? Contact through the web form 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: https://www.eviblu.eu/sheet-metal-machines/

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Need Help! New User 0 Conversions Even With Smart Traffic

Hello! I’m looking for advice. I have two digital campaigns going that click through unbounce landing pages. I can see that the impressions are delivering clickthroughs to the landing pages but I’m having 0 conversions. I even added the Smart Traffic since it claims that will increase conversions but NADA! The landing pages match the ads and target audiences. I’m concern because this is work we are doing for a client and 0 results thus far. PLEASE HELP! These are the landing pages: https://inquire.ndnu.edu/ https://choose.sage.edu/bachelors/

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Lawn Maintenance Landing Page

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible Just trying to drive phone calls and form fills. Client does not offer fertilization alone, only with full mowing package. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? AdWords search ads, for keywords such as “lawn maintenance, lawn mowing, grass cutting service, etc…” 3: What is your conversion goal? Just trying to get the cost per conversion low as possible. So far, I’m converting at about 12%. 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: ex. http://try.wakeprolawncare.com/lawn-mowing/ Thanks!!!

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Landing page not generating any leads at all

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Visitors to the site aren’t engaging with any elements. They drop off without doing anything. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? PPC. 3: What is your conversion goal? I’d like to get at least 5% filling out the contact form. 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: ex. https://approved.rateshop.ca

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Easy To Understand? Need flow/visual feedback

Trying to redesign our standard template to fit in more with our brand, be more dynamic, and work with Marketo forms. Feedback on this page would appreciated, especially if you find it easy/difficult to understand that you need to complete the form and what the content is about. trylibris.photoshelter.com Libris Visual Storytelling Webinars | 17 Hacks for 2017: How To Win With Visual... You do NOT want to miss #9. 17 Hacks for 2017: How To Win With Visual Storytelling.

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First Landing Page, in the bag!

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Generate Lead form submissions and phone calls of consumers that are in need of various types of care. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google PPC 3: What is your conversion goal? Form submission or phone call 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertible: info.goldenagecompanions.com/live-in-care/

Ashwin_Satyanarayana

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Convertible Feedback. Can you help?

Hey you guys, I wanted to use an overlay to start getting sign-ups for my business. I’d appreciate it if you can give me some feedback on it? The black, white, and red are in keeping with the branding and to match the look of rest of the site. Please let me know. Ash

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Feedback on https://get.labster.com/simulations-university/

Hello everybody, I would like to elicit some feedback from you concerning our marketing funnel setup for https://get.labster.com/simulations-university/. Especially interesting for me is wether you understand the offering and if not, what’s missing from your point of view to make it more clear to first time visitors. Also, what is your take on the best practice for a sign up page for a SAAS product? Freemium, discount, both? Other alternatives? Feel free to share any interesting links. Thanks in advance, Yves

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[Feedback Wanted!] Need Help Blowing Conversions Out Of The Water!

Hi Unbounce Community, I’m looking for some feedback on a landing page for a client. We’re getting some pretty good results so far (~50% conversion rate), but we REALLY want to blow them out of the water with the results this page generates (i’m sure you can relate!). Please find a test version of the page here: http://try.slumbercloud.com/sleep-cooler-preview-link/ Any and all feedback is highly appreciated. Thank you!

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Landing Page Critique?

Would love some feedback on the landing page we created for our upcoming iPad app: http://app.ibriteapp.com/ibrite-ipad-… tks in advance - obviously once the app is live we’ll have a “download” button 😃

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Www.intolerancelab.co.uk

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? Give as much detail as possible I am trying to sell my product 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? Google adwords. & Retargeting 3: What is your conversion goal? To sell the starter test 4: Provide a link to your published landing page / convertable: www.intolerancelab.co.uk

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Feedback for Amna - a new tool for context switching

1: What challenge are you currently trying to solve? We’re trying to grow the number of users we have using Amna. This means that people who visit our site need to clearly understand our product. Since it might be a new workflow, that may not always be entirely clear. Our product solves context switching and makes it really easy for people to define tasks and pull in all of the supporting content. 2: How are you driving traffic to your page? At the moment, we’re expecting to launch on Product hunt and Hacker News. We also have 3: What is your conversion goal? 40% 4: Paste a link to your published landing page / popup: 👇 Amna Landing Page

Nicolas_Trimardeau

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Landing page critique

Hi guys, We used to buy some trafic from Adwords and we recently decide to switch our landing pages to unbounce to improve our conversion rate. I would like some expert advices for this landing page : http://book.pixalib.com/en/self-publishing/ The goal of this page is to make a bridge beetween the PPC Ads and the registration form. Thanks in advance!!

rebeccajwoodul56

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Feedback on my LP set? SO much appreciated

Hi all! Stoked to be on here getting input from folks more experienced than I 🙂 Here is my conversion pathway, any and all feedback is especially helpful! landing page 1: http://www.craftforce.com/yourworkforce/ (linking to lp 2) landing page 2: http://www.craftforce.com/download-your-guide thank you a million to anyone who pitches in, truly feels so great getting some fresh advice

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